Academic Writing_Coherence & Cohesion
Corrected : Gustriyanti Enjelina Siahaan/4122201049 Proofreading : Nada Syifa Aura G.W/ 4122201055 ABT 3B PAGI Coherence & Cohesion : The coherence and cohesion of the paragraph are as follows: The paragraph discusses the history and origins of “The Importance Of Technology In The World Of Education”. - The text has a clear overall structure, with an introduction, body, and conclusion. This helps to give the text coherence and make it easy to follow. - The text uses transition words and phrases, such as "however" and "in addition", to connect ideas and create cohesion between sentences and paragraphs. - The text uses repetition of key phrases, such as "information technology" and "curriculum", to reinforce important ideas and create coherence. - The text uses examples and evidence to support its arguments, which helps to create coherence and make the text more convincing. Overall, the text demonstrates good coherence and cohesion, which he...